
All the people who know my they say I am not very strong girl. They said all the time for me if my parent is not here what I will do? I do not know why they said that. I feel very angry when they said that for my parent or for me. I asked my father all the time if what they said is true or not all the time he say for me do not focus about what people said they feel jealous from you because they know who much I love you , but when I ask my mother if what they said is true she say yes. I asked why she said that she was answer if we are not with you we are shore you will do not do anything such as, go shop for you self, cooked some food or go to hospital if you are sick. Some of my mother said was true because I did not like to go to the malls without my parent. In one day when I was in the college my old sister calls me and she said she will go to Marina mall because she wants to buy a gift to her hasped.I said for her I will go white her after I finished my class. I did not call my parent to tell them I will go to the mall because I want to make it surprise for my parent. We wont to Marina mall and she invite me eat lunch. When we was left my abaya was stock in Escalator and the place was very crowded, I asked my sister to help me she said for me she cannot help only she will bring seizer to cut the abaya.I was feel very embarrassing When I turn my face I did not seem my sister only I seem a man who came to me and said If I did not main he will Withdrawal my aboya I appreciated what he do, and, I swear I will not go to any malls without my parent.
Thank you Haseena . Your blog is wonderful .The story you chose is very funny too . The meaning is most of the time clear. I strongly recommend reading what you write twice before publishing. Here are some mistakes that you should fix:
ReplyDeleteline1: my ---- me said =------ say.
All the people who know me think that I am not a very strong girl.They keep accusing me of relying a lot on my parents.
Keep to one tense Haseena. You have made use of three tenses in this short paragraph.
Also try to shorten your sentences please.
I am looking forward to reading your next essay.